"My Love"
Hello, I am a 13 year old girl. This year in school we are learning A LOT about poetry, I wrote this sonnet for a project and I was wondering what everyone thought. All of your comments are greatly...
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poetryprincess,This is not bad for a first sonnet by one so young.You have followed the pattern of rhymes for a sonnet, and each group of four lines is a separate thought in your poem. That is the way...
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Hello pp.I'd need to know more about you before I could comment on this.I'm pleased you found my Universal Closing helpful, though arguably the substitution of "an injured leg" for "the shortest leg"...
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Thank you for your comments.Wow do I have a lot to learn!I will try them out and see how it goes.Once I get it done I will show you.Thanks,PoetryPrincessP.S. I really appreciate all the time and...
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David,I am 13 years old. I have been dancing since I was 2 1/2. At the age of 8 I won first place in a national dance competion in South Carolina. I left my old dance school because it wasn't fun...
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Hello pp.Right, I understand.Good advice from Melody above, which you should follow.Click on "Advice to first time sonneteers" at the top of this page, and follow the suggestions.On no account should...
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